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[Ruptured]

cool

reminds me of that bit in mary poppins where she feeds them the cocaine lolz

MrScriblam responds:

wat

[Sketched - Prospector]

It was okay

Erm well if you ask me, and you dont mind me saying. I think the humour was dated and not to my taste.

The voices were annoying, both as bad as each other in their own right. I just think neither felt realistic enough, they both felt put on to someone vocal extent.

And the animation was too..well too tweened. Perhaps change the angle a couple of times to keep the watcher on their toes, and add some frame by frame so you can cope with this. Just insert a little cinematography.

sirjeffofshort responds:

Cool man, your comments are well taken and something to think about for the future.

Just to clarify (not that it matters much) there actually isn't a single tween in the whole cartoon, but the characters are actually "puppets" moved and animated on twos (in a style developed with the help of some of the animators from Metalocalypse) so I can see why it may feel that way. We do bring frame by frame stuff in on some of our skits (which you may see in the future if you wish) but for scenes that are almost all dialogue we have to do them in this manor due to our tight production schedule.

Again though, I can see where you are coming from in your comments, and they are definitely something to keep in mind in the future.

[Zombie Q]

Very cool

cool but Ive noticed a bug you might wanna get onto. When he first finds his girlfriend and closes the door on her, the door isnt there! He closes an invisible door and you can still see her slowly leaping towards us.

Othrwise very cool and Im still givin you a 10 cos I know the dorr is just one of those little things we forget!

knobbywood responds:

have you tried upgrading to flash player 10. Some images will appear missing if your haven't/

[Gravity's Just A Theory 2]

Another!

Another success for manchester, go north west!

...(theres a video on your youtube filmed in town, thats how I know)

Oggy-cheese responds:

Haha. Indeed! Us Mancunians are too awesome :)

[Spark-Boy snowday]

I liked it a lot

The animation was the best feature here but humour and voice acting was good too. I really liked the animation though, cool style and great direction (some shots were fantastic!) And what lip syncing, good job, finish it! Even MindChamber likes it, and hes famous!

beastkid7 responds:

Thanx!!!!! Your animation was awesomer ...well you actually finished yours and I didn't.

[Pokemon Hunter]

I found the easter eggs!

a pikmin one and a 4chan one, but I aint tellin how to get there ;)

NCH responds:

D: its not 4chan though.... u got it wrong.

[RFOD P3]

Whats that other game er......08, yeah that 08

Alright again dan, another 5 from your old pal, movin your score up again oo yes. Animation in this one was better than t'others, improvement yes. I liked tidus thumbs up even though he had no head. Just where do these thumbs get the power? Ten out of Liam for this.

PenCapChew89 responds:

Jesus Shitting Kristian TEN OUT OF LIAM why thank u dear sir

[RFOD P2 (better Version)]

That er.... that er.....Fall of Man

Alright dan, just slowly bringin up the score of ur animations by votin 5 (this went from 2.62 to 2.64) How about that! Like it though, Animal crossin bit was a bit of casual mind-rape.

PenCapChew89 responds:

I'm glad u enjoyed the casual mind rape

[RFOD P1 (better Version)]

Scorpion wins yeah he does.

Holy Shitmas look who it isnt! Yo dan its me the coolest, most charming and best looking guy from college (kris)

PenCapChew89 responds:

Kris my man I thought that was me lol... and yes Sccopion did win yeah he did... well mario did but...

[Invasive Species]

I did not like this.

I gave this one star because a lot of time must have gone into this but the overall movie was poor. The plot was extremely shallow, the animation could have been smoother and the models looked absolutely terrible, these were perhaps the worst thing about it. I think maybe you should direct and animate claymation if you want, sure. But please use someone elses models because these were shabby and childlike. You could tell that your main character was masked because you can't model a proper face, and what was with his six pack? Talk about cliche.

So if you have the ego to go around calling yourself a "...productions" and put a frame around your animation displaying this, please provide the ability to prove your worth.

MackProductions responds:

I give this review one star because a lot of time must have gone into typing it, but the overall point was poor.

I call myself "... productions" mainly because I produce work that is for audiences. I have been in multiple film festivals, won awards for my work, and have been featured on international TV. I have also worked on an official music video for the artist Daniel Johnston.

Sincerely,
Mack Productions