PapaLongLegs's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wacky Game Jokez 4 Kidz]

hahaha

I love this. That last reviewer must of recognised himself in the fat spotty lad with the triforce t-shirt.

Shut up and go play Modern Warfare 2 on your dads Xbox DarkX64

[Watch the Birdie]

Pretty good

Ive just started an animation and illustration course at uni too so I know the weird techniques they ask you to animate with. I think this would have been better purely flash or purely proffessional, but thats what they ask!

[The Last Gift]

LMAO

I'm so glad I waded through all the shit to reach the ending, brilliant

[Microcosm]

Fantastic Concept!

great concept for an animation- character realising he's just part of a comic. BUT! I seriously turned off when it went all matrix, thats not original dude! Either way it had a good ending.

Oh and the character design needs a little improvement

[Pregnancy And Jobs]

:O MathS

You gave your english guy a defunkt script. In the UK we dont say "Math", we say "Maths", always. Otherwise pretty good

TripleJx3 responds:

I see you picked up on that. I kept it as math cos I though if I changed it everyone would concentrait on how I pronounced it instead of what the video was saying. Tactical decision.

[Paper Wars]

:O zomg

cant beleive that other guys got so famous for his "pencilmations" after he blatantly copied you!

[A Boy & His Vision Quest]

good

but the kids dad at the beginning looked like george harrison, and then the sun looked like an egg

[Ruptured]

cool

reminds me of that bit in mary poppins where she feeds them the cocaine lolz

MrScriblam responds:

wat

[Bath]

Very good

I liked this, but something didnt seem quite finished. I read your comment on it not being as you liked but some things need a little more fleshing out.

There should be more colours, a general monotonic white on black feeling would fit well if you imported more mid tones, greys for a background etc. But I think if you're going to go with a simple background (nothing wrong with this) then add lots more colour, perhaps other creatures and psycadelic colours splashing around.

Also, I feel that the scene felt a little too big, perhaps you could zoom in a little bit in some parts.

I wanna see this again but extended! Maybe in a few years?

Hope my review helped and well done on front page!

[Day of the Madness]

Pretty cool

I don't normally go for NG fads like madness and the dreaded clocks, urgh. But this was quite good, keep it up dude, ill look out for the next one!