PapaLongLegs's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[I Can't Draw]

Hmm

I understand the gratuitous content and 'just a bit of fun' nature of this animation. But there was too much pointless swearing- every second word coming from the mum at the end was 'fucking'. It got fucking annoying so it fucking did.

The animation didn't really redeem either seeing as you relied completely on eyebrows to show facial expression- putting an ease on your tweens won't make it good animation.

SkoopleFloop responds:

Manchester eh? I live near you...

["ClayMotion"]

Hmm

Stick to the abstract stuff, becuase your figures are pretty bad. Don't let it detract from the rest though!

TheSJproduction responds:

Thanks for the feedback. the claymation was mostly focused on the morphing, the morph was so hard and time consuming, that the total outcome may not be the best outcome. :P But thanks, this is a very professional review, i like reviews like these, so i can learn from my mistakes, thanks :P

[Animating Boxes at 3am]

boo!

Hate it when cartoons reach critical acclaim because of their pre-made soundtrack. Boo! Write your own songs

Comick responds:

Thanks for totally disregarding that maybe the ANIMATION may have had some factor in people liking what they SAW. >:T

[Nerds can never love]

hehe

Nice one Ockers, good visual style

Ockeroid responds:

Thanks, Papa my man :D

[Dreamscape]

I totally agree with the guy down below

To quote:

"This movie was... mediocre, at best. While you obviously have a good deal of skill using these programs, I feel as though there was very little creative process in creating this. It felt like a high school girl trying to be artsy by drawing colorful flowers and trees so her friends could tell her how good of an artist she was. Poor work, Mr. Gamecubicle."

This felt... needless, there was a total lack of narrative. Its almost as if this is just a showcase of what you can do rather than a short film, and as such it doesn't really please an intelligent audience much- In other words, this is all fair and well but lets see you put these skills to some use

GAMECUBICLE responds:

The concept indeed came from wanting to incorporate the things I can do into one movie. I wanted to make dreamlike flight through all kinds of animation, so that is what I did. But thanks for your honest opinion.

[Metal Gear Brotha]

Was expecting more

This was well directed but both graphics and story were lacking. From the title I was expecting some kind of comedic play on black culture

PostTimeskipSam responds:

I will say the character design is pretty old and have improved since, but I'm still working on my background design. Appreciate the review and a title change would have been better.

[Pregnancy And Jobs]

:O MathS

You gave your english guy a defunkt script. In the UK we dont say "Math", we say "Maths", always. Otherwise pretty good

TripleJx3 responds:

I see you picked up on that. I kept it as math cos I though if I changed it everyone would concentrait on how I pronounced it instead of what the video was saying. Tactical decision.